Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Scorching Days Comments

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Bleeding beneath waterless splits
where barren lands open their lips
glutton dry in taking green pasture
the cattles in wetted eyes see upon the sky.........
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lily peace lago every by to ph
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 26 October 2009

It is difficult to say about scorching days.... how true shan

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Kesav Easwaran 25 October 2009

poetic heart...the last stanza lines i most liked...10

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Eyan Desir 23 October 2009

POETIC AND WELL WRITTEN WOW I LOVE THIS

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Raj Arumugam 23 October 2009

A good poem with lines that capture the environment and situation here too in Australia: On the fragmented sand hardly we can walk where metallic roads wear a deserted look Looking around sitting in a corner It is difficult to say about scorching days....

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Ejaz Khan 23 October 2009

Scorching days aren't forever, their power is ultomately broken by blissful clouds!

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lily peace lago every by to ph

lily peace lago every by to ph

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