Sunday, July 15, 2007

Scorched Comments

Rating: 3.8

The flames that scorch
They're near the fire
It's just like a torch
My feelings expire
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Ciera Ivey
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What If? 20 July 2007

i love that any line can match up with either the one above or below, if you understand what i mean very good x x

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Chris Mendros 15 July 2007

i've never heard getting burned described so eloquently. Nice work.

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