Thursday, December 8, 2005

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Rating: 5.0

She is pale in her flower garden.
Unlike the colorful earthbound tenants
populating the rows and beds.
Some uninvited and resisting eviction,
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George Murdock
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Patti Masterman 10 November 2006

This is too rich. You have a very green thumb too I've noticed.; -) Very enjoyable writing.

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Hugh Cobb 09 December 2005

An excellent poem, George. I like the tightness and the clean, strong images. This is a gem and highly submittable. Get it out there to some publications. Try 'Prairie Schooner, or Poetry.' A really solid 10. Merry Happy! Hugh

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