Thursday, December 8, 2005
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Rating: ★5.0
She is pale in her flower garden.
Unlike the colorful earthbound tenants
populating the rows and beds.
Some uninvited and resisting eviction,
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Hugh Cobb
09 December 2005
An excellent poem, George. I like the tightness and the clean, strong images. This is a gem and highly submittable. Get it out there to some publications. Try 'Prairie Schooner, or Poetry.' A really solid 10. Merry Happy! Hugh
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7/26/2025 7:29:41 AM # 1.0.0
This is too rich. You have a very green thumb too I've noticed.; -) Very enjoyable writing.