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Observe this well
By using love science
I'll prove my love's true!
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A good poem.I laughed all through.The scientific imagery adopted is palpable and pulsating.Keep writing.
Fantastic loveless journey. The poet has much tried to prove its velocity and inertia. As a reader, feeling very much relaxed considering that I will not have to try this complicated mathematics any more to prove my love is there, at least, in this writing. Thank you for bringing poetry in the laboratory manner as a guineapig. Intelligent experiment. Enjoyed. Regards, pranab
Like a fresh air in smothering psyche … thanks sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Write comment. Wonderful piece, Eyan. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks