Saturday, May 13, 2017

Science Fiction - The Voice Comments

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It was just the little things I noticed day to day
A look, a blank stare that wasn't their way
It started after the unusual night sky
When an asteroid had flew past the earth nearby
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Paul Warren
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Rod Mendieta 13 May 2017

Wow! Yes...well, swept me away into the Twilight Zone, sort of. One of those poems that grabs you with the first line and then there's no putting it down. You must have down something well there, otherwise I wouldn't be rambling almost incoherently here.

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Buried Alive 13 May 2017

I love it! Even as much as your history lessons. and that ingenious punchline at the end says it all. You've got a great imagination based in reality.

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