It was just the little things I noticed day to day
A look, a blank stare that wasn't their way
It started after the unusual night sky
When an asteroid had flew past the earth nearby
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I love it! Even as much as your history lessons. and that ingenious punchline at the end says it all. You've got a great imagination based in reality.
Wow! Yes...well, swept me away into the Twilight Zone, sort of. One of those poems that grabs you with the first line and then there's no putting it down. You must have down something well there, otherwise I wouldn't be rambling almost incoherently here.