Thursday, May 25, 2017

Science Fiction - The Tank Comments

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The Abrams tank was the best we had
It could take on the enemy in situations that were bad
We were the first that were scrambled that day
When they landed to conquer us in their way
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Paul Warren
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Buried Alive 25 May 2017

you started a great story. I want to hear the ending. It sounds like the tank was no match For an A-bomb a great non-fiction story

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Rajnish Manga 25 May 2017

'My tank was damaged and we are stuck with radiation around'..... The poems speaks of the challenges- past, present and future and to work out a meaningful resolution. Thanks a lot.

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Douglas Scotney 25 May 2017

Perhaps with the panzer there might come a bonanza, Paul.

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