Saturday, October 7, 2006

Schrodinger's Cow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Not by chance
I happened upon the cow
alone again in the empty field.
Walking at dusk on the road
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Barbara James
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Joseph Daly 07 October 2006

This is very funny. The idea is sublime and very original. The great thing about it is how you have changed the whole character of the poem by using the title. If you had a title, say 'The wandering Cow' the poem would be pleasant enough but without any depth. As it is this is a very inteligent piece.

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Barbara James

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