Monday, October 5, 2015

School Of Marriage Comments

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Listen school of marriage is the only place where people get certificate before starting it
It is only in school of marriage where we don't graduate
It is only in school of marriage where we are in school forever
It is only in school of marriage where we don't have a principal we only have students
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Darlene Walsh 13 November 2015

A wonderful poem about marriage, what a marriage should be. I enjoyed your poem very much. I definitely agree 'we don't have half term or closing day' :) As your poem says, 'one plus one is always one' But I have also found that one plus one can also equal 3 (or more) through the miracle of birth. And I have sadly seen in a friend that one plus one can equal zero, of either 'one' is evil, but then it is no longer really a marriage.

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Mercy Kihu 06 October 2015

this reminded me of my high school teacher, she always insisted that marriage is not a profession despite the certificate. don't rush! thank you for bringing out much clearer

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 06 October 2015

Verily, the school of marriage is a mysterious one, where things go topsy turvy. Loved reading and commenting.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 06 October 2015

Verily, the school of marriage is a mysterious one, where things go topsy turvy.

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John Ugolo Umah 05 October 2015

This message is the real deal, even though I'm not married yet, I still thrust this judgement about marriage to be true. Thank you for telling us what it is like before we go into it, keep writing please... Thank you Charity.

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M Asim Nehal 05 October 2015

Very true and nicely written poem, I liked it. I invite you to read my poems, thanks.

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Charity Nduhiu 05 October 2015

Your comments are most welcome. Thank you

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