Tuesday, May 10, 2016

School Going Comments

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(((SCHOOL GOING)))
When i was a child, i used to go to School.
The first thing comes in my mind every morning is school.
It looks like a haunted cottage,
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Saira Hafeez
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 May 2016

There I learn, To conceal what is apparent, To steal what doesnot belongs to me, To abuse who is different from me, I learn to deceive my fellows, And to cheat in every Exam, .... my God this poem reveals how young students can be mislead and they lead an immoral life, life long because of the influences in the school. so sorry to hear this...... tha nk you dear poetess for this thought provoking poem........ tony

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Saira Hafeez 10 May 2016

thanks

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Saira Hafeez 10 May 2016

thabks

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Saira Hafeez 10 May 2016

thanks :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 May 2016

During childhood going to school builds nice memory within. Very interesting and thoughtful poem shared really. Interesting drafting.10

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