Tuesday, April 12, 2005

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Rating: 3.9

I was so sorry, really.
On closing our heavy door
a slight resistance was detected
as if the hinges needed grease.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 25 August 2005

Good poem....It's nice to see you care about animals.

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Scarborough Gypsy 16 April 2005

Herbert, I loved this too. You are so good a putting a story into a poem. I love the title and the name of the lizard. Gypsy PS I take it, I am aloud to read your poems beginning with 'S' now? ?

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mother baxter 12 April 2005

lizards though ugly are almost handsome rubarb

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 12 April 2005

Very well written Herbert.Liked everything about it esp the subject.Thank you.

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Mary Nagy 12 April 2005

A true poem of compassion. Mary

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