Wednesday, August 31, 2011

Schism Comments

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You speak of my depression,
Something I have yet to see.
Hiding in darkest shadows,
Is this the land your eyes
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Stefanie Fontker
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Allemagne Roßmann 01 September 2011

Very passionate as well with swings of emotion.Wonderful representation of art here.The title is also befitting and well explained in lines 6 and 9 respectively with powerful strokes of words.

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Ben Burger 31 August 2011

Beautiful, heartwrenching and romantic, in its own way

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