Wednesday, September 16, 2009

Scheming On Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

no more settlin for less
when i know that i can have the best
people always think i'm scheming
but how can you scheme on love
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elena winters
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John Weber 18 September 2009

I appreciate the tumolt and passion on this work, Elena! There's such a wonderful thread running through this one with a hidden question left for the reader to ponder. I not only enjoyed this one, I'm grateful to you for reaching out to me to check it out. Wish I had more time to play in other people's playgrounds. Warm regards, John.

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Shekhar Joshi 17 September 2009

The last lines touched the most........good interesting work....really how can someone scheme on love........ liked it...........well written too....

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Erin Ford 16 September 2009

so so true boys always tripin an scheming about love.

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George Anastasia 16 September 2009

Beware of greeks baring gifts. Cover the heart LIGHTMAN George Garrett Anastasio

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Keith Hendrickson 16 September 2009

wow this is a great poem. i like your style of writing. i cant wait to read more.

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Tobias Gray 16 September 2009

a very strong poem...well written!

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Sans Serif 16 September 2009

*stands up* I hear you. This is a great poem about someone playing with your heart.10+

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