Monday, June 24, 2013

Scent Of Grief Comments

Rating: 5.0

I caught but a glimpse of her pale moonlike face.
She was wearing a yellow sweater with white lace.
Standing on tiptoes, peering over the edge, I
wondered, how cold was it, six feet below?
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Yasmin Khan 20 March 2015

A sweet. gloomy atmosphere prevails.

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C.ann Penning 26 June 2013

A lovely write I enjoyed for sure.

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Valerie Dohren 24 June 2013

Carnations have further symbolic meaning - you may like to read my poem entitled My Lovely June. Enjoyed reading.

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