SMALL THINGS HAVE A WAY OF ROLLING DOWN HILL AND BEGOMING BIG THINGS...
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YOu tend to always remeber the way someone smells wen ur in love~they hav their own unique scent good job! even wen their miles away!
Scent …it takes a poet to allow our senses to freely indulge. Thanks
Beautifully written; a whole world in a woman's scent. Like memories that linger in the morning air, after waking up to her absence...
Glory! Be ye' praised, nay truer words moved thee. To all pining love's, ay guild ah lowly lonely land lubbers... Thar be her scent. y'argh! (any excuse to type like a pirate)
the scent of this woman so loved, was sent to you from above. a reminder of things of the past, things that will forever last. a strong and beautiful write, it fills the heart with delight. a ten
This poem gives a fresh perception of scent as a metaphor for a woman. Memories can be conjured up by various means or ways. Beautiful memories make soft pillows for ones head-especially at 1 AM!
Welcome to Poemhunter. Scent can be a subtle hint as you subtly hint through out the poem.
No scent on earth is better to man than that of a woman and yuor easy to read style is great....well done regards
here in the IndoPAK subcontinent we have a very very common and well known saying....i transalte...without the real flavour of it 'dont kill the old mans wife...u may kill him' true @ both levels.... very well written...heart felt and touchy... a nostalgia deep rooted....and boy does it hurt... lovely penning tc
Hey are you new to Poem Hunter.. If so welcome to PH family my dear sir! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is very nice to read! ! refreshing poem, .. Free flowing and smooth language. Lovely piece indeed. Wish your stay will be a long one, cause some people come, stay for few days and then leave.. This is good.. cheers and best wishes Shan
Her fragrance like a flower has attracted the poet well and out came a beautiful poem like this.
Nice flowing piece and I like the way you drew out the sent oops mean scent or was I right the first time? ? anyway sent or is it scent you a 10
In later years all our senses create memories, a scent, a touch, sight, a sound, or even taste can make a return to some long gone friend or place. Lovely poem I like the structure with the short lines.
beautiful poem told in short line with matching flow.top marx for you surya
short lines...nice to read..since this is ur first entry so i welcome you wth sampaguita garlands.the scents are filled wth blessings..so fragrant that it reach the radar of real poets..ssshhhh..i love this..
For your first post this's great, I'm glad I got to comment on this because your form is brilliant....really enjoyed this sweet aromatic write...well done. Keep expressing..................10
how beautifully written...your style is very much your own..