Sunday, February 15, 2009
Scent Comments
Rating: ★5.0
If I could smell
I would drink your scent in
like a man who had crossed a desert
Quenching on oasis water
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Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) .
27 February 2009
Jim Your images are outstanding - trees, grass strawberries and the poem is magic. The last line 'to carry me to the next oasis' carried me as well. Karin Anderson
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7/28/2025 8:44:31 AM # 1.0.0
A truly romantic verse and you used here the sensual attractions which came over extremely real..... love the idea of 'drinking the scent in ' - - - 10