Sunday, February 15, 2009

Scent Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I could smell
I would drink your scent in
like a man who had crossed a desert
Quenching on oasis water
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Jim French
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Fay Slimm 05 April 2009

A truly romantic verse and you used here the sensual attractions which came over extremely real..... love the idea of 'drinking the scent in ' - - - 10

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Jim Your images are outstanding - trees, grass strawberries and the poem is magic. The last line 'to carry me to the next oasis' carried me as well. Karin Anderson

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