Scenic Route Comments

Awesome narration with stunning style, the houses collapsed, not even worth the human act of breaking in, fields will have taken over.

lovely poem! thanks for sharing...congrats on being poet of the day!

Nicely written poem, Thanks for sharing.10

Keen and sensitive beauty and a touch of sadness narrated in flow of time. Enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing.

Lovely. So many places like this where i grew up.

Packed up his life and drove off! Thanks for sharing.

Very creepy. I like it espeacially the last line.

Excellent the beauty of expressing eternity with modern thoughts of accepting and rejection. Oft quoted so many lines are in procession....really enjoyed its poetic essence. Thanks to PH.

Her wording of this poem makes me feel as if I'm traveling along with the poet on this trip! So vividly descriptive!

She really brings out how evocative an abandonded house is, how there's a life that's been abandoned too. The closing stanza is a perfect ending.