Mushrooms and meadows
Sunshine and shadows
Gentle ripples on the calm river
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Wonderfully crafted...a spectrum of contrasts packed with evocative imagery.
Very well written, comes so easily. You are a wonderful writer.
This poem is full of interesting comparisons and well described, unique little observations! Cute, funny and keeps you reading!
extreme imagery with nice wording and twisted also rhythmic....
Page words go popping while poems go hopping and readers go shopping Insights have formed a V-line The feelings too are divine as rhythms swarm in wine. Screen seizes virtual lovers too Thus they miss out on the window's song for the window, it does not sing on cue since the wind anytime may it sing to woo.
Your alliterative, stylistic and rhymic techniques and adorable imagery copiously pinpoint the authenticity of the poem.
A fine assemblage of images and contrasting rhymes and rhythms that are the essence of the flow and contrasts at the joy and heart of Nature.
That really is good, especially for someone whose first language may not be English. Thank You! Mark Walters
Wow wonderful write on nature. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry
beautiful poem-I enjoyed reading it-thank you for sharing!
Wonderful imagery and imaginary. You have so brilliantly composed this poem taking different contrasted beings and things. Haunting expression. I appreciate your art. The concluding two lines say much about nature's panoramic and God's picturesque. Thank you dear madam, full vote for this poem.