Sitting on sea shore
So cool and calm wind blowing
Unknowing of whats happening around.
Very far away somewhere in horizon
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I like your rhythm, so unusual and melancholic! ! ! ! And always a surprise at the end. Very beautiful Poetess! ! !
this is the live example of God's real scenery being so creatively imitated by the art of poetry with a feel in it! ! !
You have so creatively captured the scenery of the seashore and sky with golden sun. Here I quote..... Sitting on sea shore So cool and calm wind blowing Unknowing of whats happening around. Very far away somewhere in horizon I could see the pretty golden coloured Sun looking like a bride glowing all over. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10