Thursday, September 19, 2013

Scenery Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting on sea shore
So cool and calm wind blowing
Unknowing of whats happening around.
Very far away somewhere in horizon
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2018

You have so creatively captured the scenery of the seashore and sky with golden sun. Here I quote..... Sitting on sea shore So cool and calm wind blowing Unknowing of whats happening around. Very far away somewhere in horizon I could see the pretty golden coloured Sun looking like a bride glowing all over. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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Poetheart Morgan 22 September 2013

I like your rhythm, so unusual and melancholic! ! ! ! And always a surprise at the end. Very beautiful Poetess! ! !

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Shahzia Batool 19 September 2013

this is the live example of God's real scenery being so creatively imitated by the art of poetry with a feel in it! ! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 September 2013

Glory to be the God nice scenery

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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