Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Scavenging Ravens Comments

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I am so scared to close my nose,
As I may offend the deplorable souls,
An earthen pot filled with boiling rice,
Comfortably sits in the middle of flies,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Heather Wilson 05 May 2012

So much pain and suffering in this world, you have put that over very well in your writing, often just the basics of life needed like clean water and fesh air to breathe, and so many others just don`t seem to care, maybe they do but money means more perhaps. Did you read my Suffer Little Children

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Dave Walker 03 May 2012

A fantastic poem, really great write. Like it.

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