Sunday, February 10, 2019

Scattered In Layers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Birds Trill On Trees,
In The Dusk,
Children Rejoice Their Game.
In Garden,
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 April 2019

People Look Mysterious, Garden Look Tremendous, Young Couples Laughing, Old Are Walking, Sun's Rays Dying, Darkness Increasing. Be vigilant........... the scattered layers of darkness shall not make you sit hopelessly......... lovely poem. to ny

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Sam Gull 15 March 2019

beautiful message conveyed with thoughtful approach.

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Sam Gull 15 March 2019

All Ready For Returning Home, Without Enjoying Birds Songs, I Am Compelled To Think, In Life's Journey All Are Scattered In Layers, No Time For Other's Care, No Desire For Needy's Help, I Want Change In Behavior, All Enjoy Present

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Konab Ghumman 15 March 2019

your comments f5 fo me. Stay blessed.

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