Monday, June 11, 2007

Scattered Ashes Comments

Rating: 4.9

Will you love me in the future
Like you're loving me today,
When our skin in old and wrinkled
And what hair we have is gray?
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Linda Ori
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Oh, this is a wonderful piece. I think it begins with the fears all lovers have and ends wtih the hopes, the imperatives they share... the truth of which is to be borne out by experience, day by day. Brilliant. t x

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Midnight...Once again you do delight our fancy for poetic eloquence...Great tone & rhythm...Structurally pristine...You go girl...and don't you put that pen down for a moment! FjR

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William Jackson 11 June 2007

Lovely thought and poem. It reminds me of Browning's 'Grow old along with me! The best is yet to be, the last of life, for which the first was made. Our times are in his hand who saith, 'A whole I planned, youth shows but half; Trust God: See all, nor be afraid! ' '

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H H 11 June 2007

Lovely. This should be treasured by many who have lived this. H

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