Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Scary Monsters...Psychic Salsa Comments

Rating: 5.0

In darkened box sits the scare.
Construe we only; demons fare.

Slumped head on deflated chest.
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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014

Saadat I enjoyed every line, keep it up

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Ejaz Khan 24 May 2009

The strong imagination is capable to create anything, a beautiful poem with rhyming and flow.10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 19 May 2009

Your poems as i find them have a beautiful flow in common...and this one is no exception...good write, Saadat...10

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Joseph Poewhit 19 May 2009

The last line is truth. Many monsters are fake and come from our imagination, or tales told by others.

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