My heart is bleeding my eyes are crying
Inside I almost feel like i'm dying
There are scars that just won't fade
But the tears that I cry can wash away
                
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i know exactly how you feel. This poem is exactly what I have been through. Thank you so much for writing this =)
this is an amazing touching poem. i just thought that you should know that your poem has really touched someone. i did not even have an account on this site but i had to make one so that i could comment on your piece. it is truely amazing and honestly meant so much to me.
This is a great poem. I love the way you write. I wish I could write poetry the way you do. The last two lines were absolutely the best for me. I may quote you, if that's okay with you. You are an amazing poet.

 
                     
                
Nobory feels any pain, Tonight as I sit inside the rain..... Dylan, Bob