This night is a witness
To my agony and pain
The restlessness
And to the childish act
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A wonderful imagery poem, layers of darkness, usinh this imagery has made the poem excellent
Heartache and regret are beautifully written with great imagery!
And in this abandonment What do I count? Our kisses, our closeness Stillness of time Or the lifeless petals.......an impressive question that inspires love. It is a beautiful poem on love. Well written and impressive. So touching and moving. Thanks for sharing.10
This night is a witness To my agony and pain, ..... fantastic starting,10