Thursday, October 13, 2011

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We had everything. We were the perfect couple.
Until... that fateful day. It was a cold and lonely, rainy
night, with no hope of forever in sight.
I wanted you. I begged you. I cried for you.
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Jamal Brown
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Rex Lynn Warden 05 October 2020

It is very, very, very, visual. I felt like I was the girl in this poem.

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this p[poem i have read, i could feel your emotions, the sadness, the pain the regret, the everything. this poem i read is filled with freatness, a known whriter just waiting to be dseen and heerd. this poem somehow reminds me of my friends and of my own past relationship. it was an abusive one. she got hurt worse than i did though. and the guy i was wityh hurtr me bad. in evrey way. i can relate to this poem in some way. its so sad but yet so beautiuful.! well done!

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Jamal Brown

Jamal Brown

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