Sunday, July 29, 2012

Scarry Moment.. Comments

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The serpent was in front of me,
But a real king Cobra, so slim,
Sparkling with bluish tint,
Scales glittered with no attempts,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Walterrean Salley 02 August 2012

Very gripping account of an extremely frightening moment. You were quite bold in such encounter. Happy things turned out well, and that, neither, you nor your dogs suffered harmed. Enjoyed reading this piece.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 30 July 2012

Nice documentation of thought communication. Detailings are excellent.

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Kevin Halls 29 July 2012

A very scary encounter indeed! I like the words describing the Cobra, well written. Thankfully we don't come across snakes where I live, just some nasty dogs now and then! A good poem.

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