Im scared to trust now.
I had my trust broken many times before.
I was left a broken girl.
I still am broken inside.
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My trust too was shattered by someone I loved and devoted myself to. You have to trust in yourself because no one can take that away from you! You will be stronger and better by learning to let go and trust in yourself. Be Well
Trust in others erodes sometimes when one goes through bad experience.Trusting oneself, gathering strength from inside and moving ahead is real victory in life.But trust, there are many loving souls around.
As a former English teacher, I can't help suggesting a few corrections: I'm scared to trust now. I had my trust broken many times before. I was left a broken girl. I still am broken inside. I simply cannot trust. It's not you; it's me. My trust can't be broken again. So don't ask me to trust 'Cause I can't do it. I'm too scared to trust.
After a while it will be solved and a good poem enjoyed.
Another 9 year old, one and done, juvenile poem gets selected to show-case. So many good poets on this sight are being slighted! C'mon, PH, put some thought into this!
I can definitely relate to this poem. Thanks for sharing and Congrats.
great poem and it so true never trust only gets you hurt in the end look to see more your work hope you continue to write
I CAN IDENTIFY WITH THIS, TRYING TO GET IT BACK THOUGH. VERY GOOD POEM.
Correct me if I'm wrong...but isn't trust something that has to be earned?
ive been tryin to find a poem like this for awhile u said the things i really relate to nice choice of words
I love this poem, and I know excately where you are coming from with it, I am a broken girl too.
So sad as we ought to be in it. Don't trust as you have the trust.