Thursday, August 6, 2009

**scared To Death** Comments

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I just heard the worse news I think I could hear.
He was in an accident.
A really bad car wreck.
The doctor said he kept saying my name - It was basically all he said.
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Ashley Nichol
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Ashley Stone 18 August 2009

Beautifully written - chasing a high a life-long perscription

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 August 2009

good description of hurt and pain narrated in this lovely poem

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Shekhar Joshi 17 August 2009

nice poem.......you expresed the pain well......hope hes well now.........best o luck for you two...... good one........

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Chesney Russell 14 August 2009

I hope he is ok, I started to feel your pain whilst reading this, your feelings are so strong and your ability to express them stronger still. Wonderfull

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this is truly what people will say true love at it's purest and i loved this part here He is better than drugs. I feel him coming to get me high. Addicted for life. I feel him when I'm restless. I feel him when I cannot cope. He says I'm his addiction. Ill be his prescription - His antidote. I will kill the poison. Ease the suffering. I'm going to calm his rage when he is afraid to feel again. He is the strength of my Life. I loved this part from its emotions that it's brings out towards love and compassion for your lover very well done Ashley 10/10

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jko gug 06 August 2009

This is a beautiful poem x

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Ashley Nichol

Ashley Nichol

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