I just heard the worse news I think I could hear.
He was in an accident.
A really bad car wreck.
The doctor said he kept saying my name - It was basically all he said.
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good description of hurt and pain narrated in this lovely poem
nice poem.......you expresed the pain well......hope hes well now.........best o luck for you two...... good one........
I hope he is ok, I started to feel your pain whilst reading this, your feelings are so strong and your ability to express them stronger still. Wonderfull
this is truly what people will say true love at it's purest and i loved this part here He is better than drugs. I feel him coming to get me high. Addicted for life. I feel him when I'm restless. I feel him when I cannot cope. He says I'm his addiction. Ill be his prescription - His antidote. I will kill the poison. Ease the suffering. I'm going to calm his rage when he is afraid to feel again. He is the strength of my Life. I loved this part from its emotions that it's brings out towards love and compassion for your lover very well done Ashley 10/10
Beautifully written - chasing a high a life-long perscription