Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Scared Of The Dark Comments

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Every night i lay in my bed
Scared, listening for the sound of your car
Listening for the sound of your voice

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Anna Maria Louisa Deyzel
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Manonton Dalan 18 September 2008

girl hold on to that thought of getting even and throwing eveything away. it doesn't worth it. besides you can write a beautiful poem. you have readers all over thew orld like me. md

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Tia Maria 18 September 2008

When I read something like this I have to emotionally detach - the anguish comes across very clearly & the end is very powerful. A very well written account of the unseen crime....

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Jazmine Marchelletta 17 September 2008

It's a very nice poem and it is funny how some of the most greatest poets use simple and small titles but the poem is full of meaning...

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