Monday, September 12, 2005

Scared Of Love Comments

Rating: 3.5

When i saw you
I was scared to talk to you
when i first talked to you
I was scared to friend you
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erika Jen
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Jerry Hughes 28 September 2005

dear Erika, watch your spelling and your grammar, bad habits are hard to break.

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Amanda Leah 23 September 2005

this could be good but it needs a little editing... Amanda

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Sallie Howson 12 September 2005

simple and good..but shouldn't it be ' befriend' as a verb instead of 'friend''?

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Aashish Ameya 12 September 2005

and as i read this, i am scared to forget this..good poem

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