Monday, November 11, 2013

Scared & Confused Comments

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Free verse or Rhyme,
The end result is the same time after time,
My heart spelled out on the page,
Yet you still safe and warm in your little cage,
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Anhi Jordan
Confused Rhyme
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Utsav Patel 11 November 2013

That's good stuff. But if you're rhyme then it must be in every next lines. You missed couple of times. (agony eyes, mind you)

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Anhi Jordan

Anhi Jordan

Tallahassee, Fl
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Tallahassee, Fl
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