Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Scared Comments

Rating: 4.5

As I walk in the door,
I see your face light up,
Like I was the sunshine in your rainy day.
I see the pain in your eyes,
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Sarah Riley
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Kevin Carney 09 September 2010

This is a really good poem. I feel your fear and pain throughout it. Your hope for things to be better shines in the end. Nice write.

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