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you don`t wanna be like me
with so many tears you can`t even see
what i do when i lock myself away
not wanting to breathe another day
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Ashely, Your writing conveys a great deal of emotion. I think it's a really fine start, and I can't really attempt to 'critique' poetry because it is an objective art form. In my opinion, if this helps you deal with your pain and get it out, then it has served its purpose...great job -david
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8/1/2025 5:30:12 AM # 1.0.0
agree so much. trying to stop is the hardist thing ever, sometimes it's harder to stop than it is to carry on. so much emotion in this, and being able to relate to it so much brough tears to my eyes.