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Nice flow to this poem and good storyline. Enjoyed the read, Just a little advice here, try to find other situationslike nature, places, events, humourous ideas to vary your writing, as it can get boring if all your poems are centred around love and passion. I know you are at that romantic age, but not everyone is and a good variety of storylines are always looked on with favour. No criticism meant here, I like your style. Love Ernestine XXX