Wednesday, July 29, 2020

Scared Comments

Rating: 5.0

the light post stands alone
by the side of the tar coated road
shedding a pale yellow glow across
the half dead grasses at its concrete base
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 July 2020

Silence pervades deep/into the lives as the devil/spreads its scary influence across/the remote corner of innocent world....beautifully put! An excellent poem....10/10

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M Asim Nehal 29 July 2020

Outstanding poem on the subject, I liked the way you described the mute standing of a lamp-post/ Light Post standing and witnessing so many things quitely. Insightful poem with philosophical touch. Beyond ratings yet 100+++

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Varsha M 29 July 2020

A lamp post the silent spectator holding every thing. Beautiful conception. Thank-you sir.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 July 2020

Scary over all Into the every pore of wind Invisible assassin Life in danger with every step of breath

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