Monday, May 22, 2006

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Upon the endless spine
of motorway they challenge
the black of night.
Those that burn
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Nalini Hebbar 28 June 2006

a beauty...loved it...clear loud pictures...nalini

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Ian Bowen 31 May 2006

Vincent, some excellent lines in this poem. You captured the journey and the moment well. Regards, Ian

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Gina Onyemaechi 22 May 2006

'Endless spine', 'clouds are cut', 'the sky begins to bleed': cracking lines, Vincey. A short but well-imaged piece of writing. So how was the merry-making? Love, Gina.

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