Thursday, October 29, 2009

Scarecrows Comments

Rating: 5.0

Magnified by my tears
A bird sat on my windowsill
Reminding me of how I once
Could answer to your call
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Sherri Coulter 01 December 2009

Here against all rules I break down and cry.......i love this poem.going on my fav. list..10+

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

'My feathers cut, no longer free Indeed this is protecting me'. this is so emblematic of the ideas in this. You make the reader work; not that your writing is difficult to follow; no, it is more that it is your ideas which are cerebrally challenging and complex; but a great reward follows in this one, if you can just keep your eye on the ball. Really amazing; hope you will place a lot more of your writing here..(smile)

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Rachel Butler 30 October 2009

'As we use our wings' Rachel Ann Butler

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