Scar On Moon's Face Poem by Saroj Padhi

Scar On Moon's Face

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Night after night clouds scrubbed her face

to erase an etched scar causing a strange grimace

of pitiable pain inflicted by a fierce macho Sun

that her insides in fury of vengeful rays tried to burn

as if in a resolve to turn her into a spray of ashes

on the face of the sky without strength to return,

when stars came to her rescue with a suggestion

‘Why don't you that letter of love to the Sun not return? '



The Moon smiled and said ‘What shall I return

when its words of entreat have been defaced by my tears

shed in lonely nights of my estranged love

and by drops oozing from wounds of deep hurts? '



She has learnt to live with the scar that shows her love

with memories of sweet moments dangling

like bats from boughs in earth's treasure trove;

but the mad clouds believe

one day she will be without the blemish of tainted love

and she will dazzle as the bright white dove!

Thursday, July 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2018

Clouds scrub her face as moon appears at night. But estranged love oozes from wounded hurts. But moon dazzles with love in calmness. Moon is a bright white dove. Your imagery is excellent and imagination is highly appreciated. An excellent poem is shared here...10

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