Saturday, May 14, 2005

Scantily Clad Women Comments

Rating: 2.8

Scanitly clad women roam the floors of nighclubs, hotels;
Expose flesh on the beach, materialize the lust in men.
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Anthony Dawson
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Herbert Nehrlich1 14 May 2005

He fixed the verb but................... I guess some people don't see the trees if you hit them with a twobyfour. H

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Michael Shepherd 14 May 2005

Anthony, I'll give you 5 for that marvellous coinage, 'meaterialize' which just about sums the poem up!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 14 May 2005

'Scantly'? ? ? ? ? ? OMIGOD. The poet tries to spell. Tafe offers courses. As AJS says, it's a gift. H

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