Thursday, December 1, 2005

Saying Goodbye To The Sea Comments

Rating: 4.5

looking out,
yet looking in,
a million tinkerbells,
sparkling
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Stefano Felici 01 December 2005

this poem is very evocative. this is the spirit of the truth... ahem. good images, very good images. and the words run like water.

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Declan McHenry 01 December 2005

Wow. Excellent. A couple of small typo's distract the flow but otherwise an excellent piece Vincent.

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