Wednesday, January 2, 2008

Saying Goodbye To Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun is starting to set
The breeze starts blowing through her beautiful hair
She sits there with tears running down her face
I try to wipe them away but she pushes me away
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jason zas
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Shannon Wright 02 January 2008

I've said many goodbyes. some were for a short time and some were forever. either way it feels like death. i give your poem a ten. thanks justin. -shannon

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Dislocated Heart 02 January 2008

nice poem dude. take care, and wish you and her luck in love and life.

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