Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Say You Don'T Love Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tell the truth, pierce me
with your innocence,
say you don't love me.
My bed isn't adorned
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Neela Nath Das
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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

this is a beautiful poem Hari. Emotions are not meant to be played with. nice one

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David Wood 07 June 2013

You write with such emotion and deep feelings. This is a really good poem Hari.

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Patricia Grantham 06 June 2013

It is not good to lead a person on and say that you love them. The person will believe with all their heart and soul. When they find out otherwise they are crushed beyond repair. A heartfelt write.

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R.j. Wynn 06 June 2013

That's the bomb Hari, in more ways than one, well penned indeed, emphasis on indeed.

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Unwritten Soul 06 June 2013

You not sounds right here, have some problems? or is it just a tale? ? well if you have bad times, tell me and i will listen..we will try to solve it..we are friends right? _Soul

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Farah Ilyas 05 June 2013

Poignant poem with intense display of emotions, one for whom, outward appearance has more value than your internal summits, love is not their cup of tea.let them go....well presented.

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