Tell the truth, pierce me
with your innocence,
say you don't love me.
My bed isn't adorned
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You write with such emotion and deep feelings. This is a really good poem Hari.
It is not good to lead a person on and say that you love them. The person will believe with all their heart and soul. When they find out otherwise they are crushed beyond repair. A heartfelt write.
That's the bomb Hari, in more ways than one, well penned indeed, emphasis on indeed.
You not sounds right here, have some problems? or is it just a tale? ? well if you have bad times, tell me and i will listen..we will try to solve it..we are friends right? _Soul
Poignant poem with intense display of emotions, one for whom, outward appearance has more value than your internal summits, love is not their cup of tea.let them go....well presented.
this is a beautiful poem Hari. Emotions are not meant to be played with. nice one