Thursday, March 13, 2014

Say That You Love Me Comments

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Say you love me now - and forever it's lasted
So my tears will hold back its flow
And our dreams no longer impassed
Let us once more hear the birds' song rose
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Nhat Thuy Vi
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Robert Murray Smith 05 June 2018

A lovely romantic write.++10 Ps correct breaf to brief

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 December 2015

Love is the key about life! And, love heals the heart. Nice work.

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James Mclain 06 December 2015

Love it's face to last Day and night the moon must rise Then set against the sky Don't trim the burning wick Don't say goodbye Dawn will come again my love Come evening bird's arrive .. iip Tình yêu đó là khuôn mặt để cuối cùng Ngày và đêm trăng phải tăng Sau đó thiết lập chống lại đậu nành Đừng cắt bấc đốt Đừng nói lời tạm biệt Bình minh sẽ đến một lần nữa tình yêu của tôi Hãy đến buổi tối chim đến.. iip

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Hannington Mumo 17 June 2015

I like this well-composed piece from the first letter to the last...

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A creative and compelling cry for companionship! Well done my friend!

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Sekharan Pookkat 20 May 2015

The sweetness of your sound is so touching- thank you for sharaing

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Vi Nhat Thuy 21 May 2015

thanks Sekharan Pookkat for your comments. Have a great day! Vi

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