Wednesday, June 15, 2016

Say Nothing Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you say
You do not say
When you do not say
You say
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Bharati Nayak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 August 2022

When you say You do not say When you do not say You say......beautiful expression dear poetess Bharati. Appreciated this wonderful poem. Top score!

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Soran M. H 21 June 2020

When silence is equal to speech, we understand each other and this is the way to spiritual conversation, but not everyone understands this language except for those who have a beautiful sense and a heart full of love.

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Soran M. H 21 June 2020

The words come flying And take me In their embrace I become your words That I want to hear.

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Soran M. H 21 June 2020

How beautiful are these transparent and gentle expressions that only professional poets can write it, it is a world of harmony and real love, it is short but expressive and warm, I enjoyed reading it well done and iy goes into my favorites list 10/10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2018

This poem is releted with feeling based on understanding. The communication of feelings among lover and beloved is intensive and charming. He wants to say something but can't. On the other hand she understands his feelings. Very beautifully you have inscribed this poem dear madam, it is ten for you out of ten.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 January 2017

Often man wants to say something but he cannot. Again often he says something that he never wanted to say. For a true lover and friend it's at all not difficult to understand the true feelings of his beloved or a friend. A beautiful poem.

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Siddartha Montik 15 December 2016

is it because.. it is said Languages are the barriers, in a way, of Civilization? And we all lost reading and understanding the Body language? haa! thought provoking! thanks for sharing Bharathiji! 10++!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 October 2016

The feelings of love. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 25 June 2016

It is often the things not said that are heard loudest

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Daniel Brick 22 June 2016

I love the tightness of this poem. You use a restricted vocabulary very effectively so every word adds to the meaning. The poem begins with a paradox about the failure of communication in this relationship. Talking is getting the two of you nowhere, so you suggest silence and voila non-verbal communication suddenly unites you. And there is a final positive note at the very end: An embrace communicates all the tenderness and respect his speech failed to deliver. And that dovetails with the title and we finally know why you have to him SAY NOTHING (but do make loving gestures) .

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Bharati Nayak 25 June 2016

Thank you for your valuable words.

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Kishore Kumar Das 17 June 2016

I embrace your words like love.......your lovely poem underscores the importance of words....

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Bharati Nayak 23 June 2016

Thank you for your words of appreciation.

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Susan Williams 16 June 2016

You are one of the wisest poets on this site- you always bring depth to your poetic messages. And there is such tender wisdom in those last two perfect lines, Bharati. Stunning piece, absolutely stunning. 10

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Bharati Nayak 17 June 2016

Thank you dear Susan Williams for your appreciative words.Your comments always bring cheers to me.

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Sekharan Pookkat 16 June 2016

lovely words come from a lovely heart1

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Bharati Nayak 16 June 2016

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poems.Your words are always appreciated.

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Queeny Gona 16 June 2016

Ah! this little brain couldn't these lines ma'am When you say You do not say When you do not say You say What I want to hear Please ignite my brain with thy philosophy Ma'am!

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Bharati Nayak 16 June 2016

Thank you dear Queeny for your lovely comment.

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