Everyday when I go for morning walk
I often come across
Young man in his late seventies
So bright and cheerful
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For few days The garden gave a deserted look But it seem that all the charms, voices of laughter He took along with him. Truly, memories linger in our mind
A very emotional saga of a grown up man who was young at heart, was always smiling and made others smile but when he bid adieu everybody got emotional and felt lonely without him. Great poem.
Hello Geetha.... beautiful written from your heart. How we think that everyone will last forever. People often think how they wish they had....... Yet it is then too late. There will be so many others who will miss this amazing gentleman
Really life is uncertain and we don't know when we have to leave without flagging hand. So, always Hi! Hi! keep all moveing. You have explored an efficacious write.
A soulful poem beautiful poem - a calm breeze its touch wow
Walking goes on as usual Begins with Hi.... Ends in Bye! Time and world never stop for anyone..............10
Beautifully penned. I love these gentle souls that bring light with them where ever they go and they are sorely missed when they pass.
Very poignant indeed penned so beautifully with touching words......Geetha........outstanding piece
This happens quite often! Very healthy, though aged, full of cheer, suddenly snatched away by death! I must say he is a very fortunate person! As long as he lived, he lived happy.... Even death was a genial friend to him who came and gave him a ride.... a ride into eternity! A story related in a very realistic way, Geetha!
Begins with Hi.... Ends in Bye! .....................Uncertainty of life nowadays very well crafted….nice
That person is truly the most fortunate who lives a smiling and cheerful life up to death. No matter how long or short is that span of life.