Thursday, October 8, 2015

Say Goodbye Too Darkness Comments

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I trudged through harsh storms,
thick waters tried to drown me.
The river ran quickly knocking
me off my feet.
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Melvina Germain
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Kevin Patrick 08 October 2015

Sums up everything about a really bad day, I think I've gone down similar rivers as yours, and they have done some battering around. The closing is very sad, it almost feels like that feeling of given up, its kind of tearful when you read it especially out loud. I don't know the sadness of others but I can say this poem is one of those once that makes me feel good in knowing I'm not alone.

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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