Thursday, September 25, 2008

Say Goodbye To My Smile. Comments

Rating: 5.0

As i feel the world spin and slip away
My eyes fall closed and i realize the end of the day
It happens so fast, it seems so surreal
Lying here so far from you, tell me how to feel
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Hailey Marie
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Silence Dogood 25 September 2008

I love the ending great job a great poem i give it a 10!

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Hailey Marie

Hailey Marie

Brampton, Ontario - Canada
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