Saturday, September 25, 2010

Saw You Comments

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Please hear my beats
they suddenly rule my feet
but I was in my fear
saw YOU - they disappear
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Floy Dy Ra Aka Floyd Floydson
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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2013

excellent poem. the turning of our pulse we do like the rhyme for ever punched in our prime.

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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2013

excellent poem. the turning of our pulse we do like the rhyme for ever punched in our prime.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 17 November 2010

please hear my beats they suddenly rule my feet--why is the heart like that, its beats are defeaning. nice poem.

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