Monday, September 1, 2008

Savoring The Long Walk Home From Your House Comments

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You take my hands in yours
You lean in close to kiss me goodnight
And you whisper sweet things about us in my ear
These days it feels like we can soar
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Justin Gildow
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Viola Grey 01 September 2008

a great sequel to ''l'll walk you home'....I love the fourth and third stanzas which allow you to dream and revel in your absolute happiness...the two poems go nicely hand in hand...great work.

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Justin Gildow

Justin Gildow

Washington, PA
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