Saving The Light A Sonnet Comments

This is a beautiful one Daniel. The words alone are pretty and the imagined image or idea that one must catch resonates with me. It makes me think of the twilight time when the conscious and unconscious mind mingle together and fleeting ideas emerge to be caught like fireflies. I hope your catch all your best words and images so they can make it to paper. Oblivion is bottomless. I like the line about darkness spilling around you in a pool of confusion. Thanks for sharing this one. Now, I have a request: I want a narrative series...like the Port Trakl collection, but a different setting this time...maybe in St. Paul? ;)

A very good poem. Iliked its precision.